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Wisefox · Wiseheart Joined: 13 Jun 2006 Posts: 917 Location: Canada

I wanted to open a topic to talk about a few things of the story/RP "Proof of Kitsune.
I have a few ideas that I would like to discuss with people interested in the story.
I had a thought of doing abit of narration for the story to help the story line some too. it would be general stuff and if you need anything said in the narration part IE:

there was a storm coming from the other side of the mountain but it was unnatural. This storm......

stuff like that. might include a small bit of what the characters did that night. But I do not want to do anything out of what you all would want. I would talk to you all individually then post what each would want in that narration.
this does not mean that you can't do your own narration it would just be a general narration.
Another part of my narration might not include my character it maybe talking about a "NPC" or some other animal or creature in the story that they would come in contact with.

Well thats my idea... I will have to post in the Rp soon so I may or maynot include some "narration".

I want to know what you all think.

Ex-Soldier Cloud · Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 7:46 pm Post subject:

ya that seems like a good idea, wont know if it works till we try it Cool

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Evergreen · Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 9:29 pm Post subject:

Cloud is right on the fact that it may or may not work but I would like to add to what he said though...it all depends on how it is worded and how it is connected to the rest of the post, you want to make it to where it is smoth and not just real sharp, and you can get really descriptive to help with that. also, say in the narrarations what is going on around the character sometimes like the scenery, small things that most woudn't ordinarrily notice like the wind blowing in your face and it gently giving your cheek a cooling kiss....ok so thats just how I do things but use literary skills as well.....long story short weather this works or not depends on how it is done, where it is put in, and how it is worded and what it describes.

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Wisefox · Wiseheart Joined: 13 Jun 2006 Posts: 917 Location: Canada

Well that last post was kinda what I meant but I did talk to Ev about how she wanted to be included in the post. so at least I know it should be ok with her..
but as for everyone else I hope you all are good with the type of narration that I mean. If there is a problem with it then I will not be posting like that then.. I want everyone to be having fun.
Btw.. the evil is kinda part of what I was talking about too.... maybe I'm just power hungry..lol.. but I want to have a big part in where this story is going..... if you want to post part of it .. I don't have any rejections.... IF you contact me first.

Evergreen · Posted: Thu Oct 19, 2006 2:22 am Post subject:

That's OK, I just read your post in RP and it looks good. The narraration was pretty smoth and thats the way it should be in my opinion, looks good. I use narraration sometimes in RPs but not as often as I should, but it won't take me long to make it a habit for this rp.

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Wisefox · Wiseheart Joined: 13 Jun 2006 Posts: 917 Location: Canada

Ok, all.... I don't know if any of you have heard of the RP term DM.
cause that is what I would say I am.
I "control" the game (or story in this case) So if anyone is planing on doing some realy cool story line please let me know. PM me so I know how the story is going (its going great so far) I would be the only one that would know I won't be telling what your character is doing as long as you don't want others to know. most of you have MSN and thus can talk to me most of the time. IF you have a idea, on what you are doing then help me help you. let me know so I can help in the story line.
Think of it like a quilt everyone has their patch and Im just trying to help them all fit together. Very Happy

I got to say one last thing.

You guys rock... keep posting Wink

Wisefox